|Reviews for Atmosfear|
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 43
Sooner or later Victoria's gonna die!
Uh oh, BElla and the other newborns are in trouble!
I love how Jasper tried to get Pearlie to make an exception for Bella.
""I heard something thump next to me and turned to see Bella thrown on the floor next to me. I cursed the chains that bound me from going near her.
Her head snapped towards me and her eyes widened with relief. "Jasper!" her eyes glisten with tears that would never fall and she crawled towards me until she was snuggled against me, trying to find the comfort that I couldn't provide."" AWE!
I absolutely love how Harriet scarificed herself to save them all.
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 41
I like Cain's POV. He really does care about Eliza!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 39
AWE I loved this chapter! Jasper and Bella's first kiss!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 26
""she curtsied slightly.
"Still a Victorian girlie, huh, Carolyn?" Peter chuckled.
She shrugged. "I still have manners, yes. Can't say the same for you unfortunately."
Peter doubled over as if he'd been shot in the gut. "That hurts, Carolyn. That hurts deep. Right here." He said pointing to his heart."" HAHA I like Carolyn!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 25
""No but if I don't Rose is going to beat it out of me." he mumbled like a small child not getting his way.
His way of speech just then made me think of a little Jasper. In a small little country house in Texas, with his mama trying to get him into the bath. I could picture him pouting and stomping his foot slightly, while his mother looked on with a small peaceful smile."" AWE such a cute mental image!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 22
""Jasper looked amused but wore and expression that clearly says 'I'm not related to you'. And Rosalie looked sort of amused but a little angry.
The waitress looked at us with a face that asked if he was mentally stable. Rose sighed. "Believe me, we're taken him to doctors all across the country. He's incurable." She faked sobs. Jasper wrapped his arms around her and cooed her.
"It's aright, Rose. They said he wouldn't survive past three. He's survived this long I've no doubt he'll last just as long… from then on I've no idea." Jasper said, faking sympathy but trying hard to hold back a laugh"" That's why Emmett's awesome, he gets himself into situations like these.
"""Well, you can't expect me to know all this chick stuff." he said, slightly embarrassed.
Jasper held his hand up high like a primary school student wanting to answer a question. "I'm a male and even I knew that."
"But you feel their emotions, your just a queer as any gay."
Rose and I burst out into hysterical laughter as Jasper looked stunned, opening his mouth on occasion to restore his dignity but never finding the right words."" THAT was awesome!
The waitress was so going to adopt Emmett!
oooooooooo Maria's back!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 20
"""What's that, Rose?" I asked her, curious and suspicious, Bella shot her a slight glare.
"Fuck, Rose. You taught her to glare too?" Emmett commented, and Bella and Rose slapped him across the head in unison.
"FUCK, ROSE! DID YOU TEACH-!" He stopped his sentence when he saw them raise both their hands. "Never mind.""" No Emmett, Bella already knew how to do that! Instinct.
I love how we got Jasper's POV in this chapter.
""Rose gave a dry chuckle. "May I remind you Bella is your sister?" Rosalie said, suddenly amused.
Emmett nodded his head and then suddenly realisation crossed his face along with horror and disgust.
"HOLLY MOTHER FUCKER! I THINK MY LITTLE SISTER HOT! MY OWN BABY SISTER!" he screamed appalled, then proceeded to run to a bathroom and scrub the 'vile images' from his eyes.
We all laughed at him and he eventually came back in avoiding looking at Bella at all coasts.
I felt her cheekiness rise. "What wrong, big bro'?" Bella asked, innocently.
I saw Emmett grimace at being called 'Big bro' I title he feels he should no longer have.
Oh, he'll never live that down."" Nope their never gonna let him forget. It was really funny though. My favorite part was when got to her bellybutton.
""I grunted, "We'll, I'm finding out one way or another. It's either you tell me or I find out by the newspaper. Hey, it's a small town and Fork's know everything." I shrugged, though secretly happy with my idle threat. Fork's thinks they know everything when they really don't know swat.
Bella and Rose shared a look, amusement shining in their eyes at their secret joke.
"Are you sure your not really twins?" Bella asked."" They very well could be. They even act like siblings.
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 19
I'm sad that Gwen died, but she's was getting on my nerves.
""Rosalie got to the house before me and I heard something fragile break.
"EMMETT!" Rose sang gleefully.
"BABY!" he squealed. Literally, he squealed."" Emmett squeals! I love how Bella was excited that her adoptive brother was there.
""Jasper sigh, rubbing his temples as if he had a headache. "Look at Bella. Smell Bella. Hear Bella."
Emmett nodded and did that. His eyes went wide. "HOLY MOTHER FUCKER! BELLA'S A VAMPIRE!" he yelled so loud I thought all of Fork's knew.
"Idiot." we all muttered."" Emmett, Emmett, Emmett. What a wonderful way to end the chapter.
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 16
""Emily glared at her. "Considering how you treated her I didn't think she meant anymore to you then the dirt beneath your feet." Emily nearly hissed. She's make a hell of a scary vampire."" YEp Emily's awesome!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 15
""He held his hands up defensively. "We're talking about Rosalie. She doesn't want to be found at the moment. She's a feisty bitch when she's pissed."
"Totally. I sometimes get her pissed just so-."
"His face said 'I don't want to know'"" Ah Emmett, Emmett, Emmett.
Emmett's going to get his wish about seeing Bella.
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 10
"'His heartbeat." I said, happily. "I can dance to the beat!"
Rosalie laughed and we waltz around the room, Rosalie playing the part of the male lead. We laughed sadistically as his hearbeat increased tenfold. We sped up to keep in the rythum of his heart and realization slowly dawned on him. She dipped me in front of him showing our teeth and when he saw the two of us he almost fainted."" That's kind of funny!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 8
Hurray for Angela's POV.
""I looked down at it and sighed. She was supposed to give this to Mike, not me. I throw it at him and it hit him square in the head.
WOOT! Score one for Angela!"" yep go Angela. I love how Angela changed and doesn't let people walk over her.
Now we know what Bella and Rosalie did.
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 7
I really love Angela's POV! It was really cool!
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 6
""My best friend, Jacob, took me in. he did help me. He started by lowering my dosage and then I eventually stopped. I couldn't take any drugs after that. Nothing. Even for headaches, which I got frequently, had to go away naturally."" Good for Jacob. I love how he and Angela got Bella on the right track again.
I feel bad that Bella's baby died.
I wonder what Rosalie and Bella are going to do for revenge?
| Fleur24 3/23/11 . chapter 5
""She pulled me forward and clutched onto me as if her life depended on it.
I was stunned at first but eventually found comfort. I kissed her forehead lovingly and softly cooed her.
"Its okay, Isabella. It's alright. I'm here. Rosie's here. I'm not sure what happened but I'm here. Cry if you want to. I'm not going anywhere. Not anymore."
She buried herself deeper into my chest and started to wail. She unleashed her pain on my shirt and I couldn't seem to care about it. That's so unlike me. But this poor, fragile girl in front of me, she brought out something in me I never really knew existed.
Love, acceptance, tolerance, kindness and of cause anything non-bitchy related.
But she brought that out in me.
I continued to silently reassure her that everything was alright and if it wasn't I'd make sure it would.
She cried, sobbed, wailed, anything you can think of she did, ad she did it repeatedly of over twelve hours. And every single one of those hours I held her. Told her it's okay, kissed her head and spoke of nothing and anything in particular."" AWE! I love how Bella's clutching Rosalie like a life line.
I absolutely love how Rosalie comforted her while Bella sobbed.