ROBIN / LUFFY / HANCOCK.

WOW.

That just totally blew my mind.

God this story is so hilarious xDDDDD

Personally i can totally see Robin living out her childhood know that she no longer has to worry about being found

Well thanks, now I'm scared for life. Luffy is now ruined for me.

Wow... this is going on my top fanfics list. Luffy was out of character on the second part, but it was still good. I would love a sequel, but seeing as you wrote this a couple months ago without an update, I am disappointed :(

thumbs up

should be rated M

Nice! *epecially the 2nd part, yohoho* I Love LuffyXHancock...though I love LuffyXNami just as much...

Its ironic really, even though OP does not include "romance" elements in the story, this manga is the first one, in which Im actually unable to chose a favorite pairing from the two choices for the MC (Nami or Hancock)...I want him to be with both! (Which kinda makes me a LuffyXHarem fan, now right?)

Though, I also think Robin would fit nicely into the fray to make Luffy's prefect little Harem...nice touch at the end btw...which makes me wonder...

THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUAL RIGHT? Im aching for a sequel...(in which hopefull, both Robin & Nami will join Hancock as Luffy's "concubines"...lol)

Hi, it's me again. Sorry about my first review. I meant to mention the lemon, but it was late, I was tired, and therefore, confusion. So here's the rest of it:

I liked how it was written. I really don't know what else to say; I haven't reviewed lemons before, just read them. But you're right in that without that silly top half a lot of context goes without explanation. The ending was incredibly tantalizing.

There. See? I DID read the whole thing. :)

LOL I loved everyones costumes and the bit with buggy just wish that you finished the bottom bit

wow that was exciting it had my heart beating faster

and faster with each line! .

both part were equally exciting! i hope u can continue

with robin joining luffy and hancock.

this story was great the ecchi part was done beautifully

and buggy and crew was funny and completed this story

nicely.

P.S.

looking foward 2 ur next stories.

good god there better be a completed story for the bottom half there. i need to see the results dammit. great story by the way

Wow, a LuffyxHancock story that doesn't make me cringe a little bit! XD

Seriously, though, you had me at Chopper's fourth wall breach. The idea of Zoro as a BDSM dom made me chuckle a bit, but Robin had me in stitches. And Spartan!Luffy, well, I guess that goes to show how much he likes armor. It's out of character, yes, but I was having too much fun to worry about that.

Nice Luffy harem references, too. I wouldn't be surprised if that kid DID end up with several adoring concubines. He is a pirate, after all.