|Reviews for Improper|
| Fenris Jin 4/29/13 . chapter 1
I'm not really a big yaoi fan.. I find myself wallowing in great fangirl grief at such notions.. but Naruto and Sasuke hooking up together instead of with billboard brow is actually more appreciated on my part.. Am I considered evil if such were the case? XD
Moving on.. Goodness me, even Hinata's expletives were so proper.. Neji! You on the other hand have such a potty mouth! XD
Neat read.. I love it. XD
| Simple Daisy 9/4/11 . chapter 1
| cloudsandsilvers 4/27/11 . chapter 1
love it : seeing neji so improper really is sexy :)) love how you wrote the characters here :) it's like their still in character but out of character at the same time.
| Jaque Weasley 1/6/11 . chapter 1
oh gosh, perfect **
| Sammi-lou 12/28/10 . chapter 1
its a great story but i dont understand why its rated M when nothing bad happened
| NinjaSheik 12/11/10 . chapter 1
| Musichowler 11/25/10 . chapter 1
It was hot and made me smile. Well done. ;-p
| LadyBardock 11/21/10 . chapter 1
This is not complete :) Please come back and continue!
| Sequel yeah 11/16/10 . chapter 1
WHAT? You're planning on ending there? Oh c'mooooooonn..you CAN'T do that! This story's too juicy and smexy and crucial and so fired-up just to be left at that. :O You got me reading at a climactic pace and BAM!-it ends there..? Oh please CONSIDER writing a sequel for this.. Please, please? :D
Loved it really. To simply put it. Haha.
Keep up the good work
| lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl 8/28/10 . chapter 1
tnx for writin it!
| The Shine Queen 8/21/10 . chapter 1
| DJ Maimai 8/18/10 . chapter 1
This story needs a sequal... In fact, I demand one.
That's right, DEMAND. If you don't continue it I'll...I'll...ummmm...Set my army of evil flying monkeys on you! Yes! That's exactly what I'll do, and you do NOT want that. Trust me.
So there, now you have to.
| Qualia Des 8/9/10 . chapter 1
Very, very sexy!
| Charanya 7/8/10 . chapter 1
AWESOME! Absolutely loved it... really. Your vocabulary is GREAT... I know, it's a very random thing, but I read the story once and then read it again and looked up a couple of words, for real!
You have the ability to describe things in such a way that makes the story really hot without the characters doing actually much. The senses are really important when describing something hot.
Great, great, great.
| blackraven615 4/10/10 . chapter 1
I cannot believe I still have not reviewed this one-shot. I've read it many times, and let me tell you, it is fabulous every time. No doubt, I will read it in the near future again. There is just something about this that makes it so memorable. I wish I could go on and on about the kick-ass powers you have but the review might be slightly too long. ;P
To put us simply, the story is wonderful. There are minimal mistakes and can be easily overlooked since it does not distract the reader. I wonder how it would be it you somehow were persuaded into adding or continuing this story. Don't get me wrong, it is amazing how it is now.
Best of luck,