 JustAShimmer 12/17/10 . chapter 1what a beautiful story :) and very well written, too, well done! |
 crazymama 3/6/10 . chapter 1I liked it! I was imagining something along these lines too... that after living their separate lives, the angels would find a way to bring them together and they would live with the mulefa. |
 methehuman 1/3/10 . chapter 1 Really lovely :) I just finished His Dark Materials trilogy, and as brilliant as the book was, and for all the interesting philosophical comments it made, I really wanted a happy ending for Will and Lyra - so thanks for giving me one :) |
 Lyla Domae 12/19/09 . chapter 1Can't really say much, except that it really was a good story.
And yeah, I think you explained Alzheimer's disease pretty well.
Other than that, I especially liked the fact that Will and Lyra got another chance at life-and with the mulefa, too.
So yeah. Great fanfic.
Luvvies,
Ly |
 GP 11/29/09 . chapter 1 nice story, just FYI, you have alzheimer's disease, not alzheimer itself. |
 g 11/29/09 . chapter 1 ty |
 KerraDelvin 11/29/09 . chapter 1 This is AMAZING! It feels so right that Will and Lyra should be together. I love they way Xaphania granted the wishes (she being the one who said they couldn't be together. Thanks for it! |
 bagshott 11/23/09 . chapter 1Thank you so much for this. It rings so true and makes me feel happy that, now for me, Will and Lyra have the happy ending I feel they deserved. You write so well, for me it could be the official epilogue! |