Aw, sweetness! your so great at writing this stuff! your style and description and the fsct that you DONT make huge unintentional grammer mistakes all the time!

for starters, i really liked how you went from the normal bandy craziness with all of them in the pool, hanging outto the more intamate calm settings when it was just those two. Aw, and how sweet is pickles taking away toki's vodka cause he's worried? he's trying to protect himfrom developing vices like his!So cute!

i love this couple and you've really made it work on a personal level for the two. i'm super hoping you write some more stuff like this soon. I'd figgin loveit if you did, your stuff is awesome.

sorry if i'm rambling or repeating/mispelling things sleep uhm err once again great great story! i really hope toread more like it soon ! (heehheheh, please?)

yay! i like that kind of distraction too! such a thoughtful guy, that pickle this was really sweet and so well thought out. i really feel like this is the way the ynamic between them would unfold. heh. I also like the thought of a drunk/high pickles attempting to wrap presents. and the thought of him tying bows in his inebriated state is espeacially amusing to me. great work!

i find it silly that pickles of all people is telling toki not to turn to alchohol to make him feel better.

what a hypocrite.

that was very cute, really sweet, i really loved it! XD