awesome story _

Ahh! Its over already. I really enjoyed it.

i love it

LOVE IT. :)

So, her room is not private enough? I am guessing he just took her there so they can be in a more "romantic" place. The situation seem forced

fluff: Very Good

I love a fluffy fic, but sometimes people try make the fluff to high energy. Fluff is better in small dose, it makes the akwerd embarrassing shyness / humiliation more realistic. To much fluff in one chapter and i think the characters should get over it.

You use the perfect amount of fluff in your stories it satisfies the need four fluff and allows the fluff to stick around four a long time.

details: Good

I love a fic thats detailed, but not so much that i have to skim entire paragraphs.

This chapter didn't leave me hanging for details, and i didn't half to skim anything.

love it

its over already? but it was so good :( great story

man i love this story you should update soon

Nice story no real cliffhangers. If you are not going to continue the story just put it as complete. I don't feel like anything is missing, unless people feel the need for them to make out.

you every going to update? i mean it's been like 6 YEARS since you updated. yes this last chapter ends nicely, but it's not and end, i would like to see an end to this

the planet vegita had 10 times earth gravity how could the the saiyans possibly have survived there with such a debilitatin problem especialy as a warrior race more power with weeker fleash in 10 times gravity dead saiyans

even totaly unpepaired a bullet canot harm gohanhe is tuffer than that

very good so far but when will you be finishing the story as it has reached an exciting part?

oh no whered it stop ? ): meany i want more i feel like crying and i was so happy earlier about going to the gym now i feel like i donno, punching something, bt last time i did i made my knuckle bleed so hm.. i know this was done about two years ago and i am sure it will not be updated but i liked it anyway and now i can make my imagination go wild soo cya x