cool

I really liked this, a lot. I'm becoming a fan of your writing that's for sure. The ficlet felt more like an opening to a story but I love it how it is anyways. Thanks for the work!

nice

A nice ficlet. The quality of your work is shown even in this small piece. well done.

if something like this happens in the manga i will be forced to find you and use baseballbatfu on your HEAD.

death and destruction and all that good stuff _

that...was awesome. Seemed like a highly probable ending to the canon story. so were the 10 people all of the jinchuurikis?

Nice one-shot.

And it's just that kind of tragic ending a videogame would have. I must admit, I too thought of a one-shot where I could write my personal Naruto ending. Your idea is better though since it makes use of all 9 hosts.

Will you write a sequel where the emotions and thoughts of the survivors are described?

Faroush

Interesting start, look forward to seeing where this goes.

Not sure where you plan on going with this but given the normal quality of your writing it should be great whatever it is.

Now I've been waiting for someone to create a fic based on the Jubi because truth be told I was sort of getting tired with the whole fifth shinobis war and whatever. You my friend have something that can be worked with and I can't wait to see what happens. Its an interesting preview and I hope and wish you the best for what's to come. Though I wonder is this before or after Konoha is destroyed?