Eeeeee! So cute and funny :3 I love it. Such a Carly move, dancing around in her underwear! Hahahaha and the Crow bit was funny too XD I can just imagine Crow doing that when he was little... Oh so silly! XDDDD

This is hilarious! Love it!

kitty

*snorts then laughs* Birdbrain in his boxers? I'd pay to see that!

I bet he looks like a putz. Then again, Jack probably isn't much better! (in other words: FUNNY!)

Crow dancing in his underwear was not a mental image I needed XD

This was cute though :)

This is...funny, cute and sweet in a way only Jack Atlas could pull off. Nice _

(At first: Sorry for my bad English...! )

Oh wow, this was so cute! x3

I loved that scene, when Carly was dancing around and Jack came into her room...

..I would like to know, what he was thinking in that moment ._. xD

And I also think, that the way how the two acted and spoke to each other was very close to their behavior in the original series... good work! :)

I hope you'll write more about them soon! x3 (I'm also reading your story 'The Blood of Kings' :3)

Sending you some friendly greetings

Megumi-chan :3

very nice and cute. the bit about crow dancing gave me a laugh. :) I really liked it!

I really like this fic. I can actually imagine Carly dancing in her underwear. And it's making me crave creamsicles but we have no room for them in the freezer T.T

WOW that was so awsome I love it so much it was so funny please make more!

DAT WOZ FUXKIN AWESOME! Make more, this cool.

I just about died laughing at the image of her dancing around and then freaking out when Jack walked through the door. This is great!

Hahaha! That made me laugh out loud about Crow xD

That was a very sweet story :) I loved it! :D

Carly dancing in her underwear seems like something she would actually do! This fic is just so good. I like how well Jack takes it.