| Reviews for Birthday Present |
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courtneythecat 4/14/13 . chapter 26NO YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE, YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE DO YOU REALIZE WHAT THIS IS DOING TO ME NO |
MikeysBoner 12/19/12 . chapter 1 So short but so awesome. |
Radio Free Death 12/7/12 . chapter 1This feels...like a sue fic. This is Rorschach and this doesn't really feel like him. He shouldn't be portrayed as 'cute'. I'm also wondering when this takes place because at the time the graphic novel takes place, everyone fears Rorschach. Here, he is awfully subdued. It would've been nice if he had been in character a bit more. He does talk in fragmented sentences, which is great since that is a part of his character. I hope that helped. |
Gaara-frenzy 12/7/12 . chapter 26YES! POPLAR WINS! so will she try and confront rorschach or find waltr with his sign again... awesome tidbit cant wait for more! XD |
samanthatm 12/6/12 . chapter 26oh does she finaly find out. |
Kovy- Closet Romantic 12/6/12 . chapter 26Ooooh! How is she going to tell him she knows? Can't wait till we find out! -V |
Gaara-frenzy 12/6/12 . chapter 25adorable! so shes a teacher eh? i wonder high school or elementary? awesome chapter, cant wait for more! XD |
nightchildx 12/5/12 . chapter 25Haha, this one was very cute :3 |
Gaara-frenzy 12/5/12 . chapter 24sqee i think that ones longer than usual. so cute love it as always cant wait for more! XD |
Gaara-frenzy 12/2/12 . chapter 23heh woah changed from cute to intense eh? my dad (and fellow watchmen fanatic) says the first step on that road would be to make him laugh. like really laugh. maybe you could do one on that? awesome chapter, i cant wait for more! XD |
Gaara-frenzy 12/2/12 . chapter 22so cute. i imagine he's be really hard to serve new food to. really picky. my brothers went through fazes where they only ate cereal, chicken and pizza. love the chapter! XD |
samanthatm 11/30/12 . chapter 23to bad he feels that way about that hope it doesn't affect her. |
Septemberfall 11/30/12 . chapter 23Ohhh super cool ! FINALLY ! Hahahaha, poor Rorschach |
Winged'Pollution 11/30/12 . chapter 23Well, it's about time, Rorschach and Mystery Woman. Though I imagine he's not very happy that she basically seduced him...ha. Keep up the awesomely fast updates! :D W'P |
Gaara-frenzy 11/1/12 . chapter 21so cute! me loves the puppy. hahaha rorschach and sexual tension, i always thought the mask would look cool if her blushed. awesome chapter, i cant wait for more! XD |