I forgot to mention in my last review, I love the bold quote thing you put in there. It was awesome.

On with this chapter.

I simply adore their interactions. They are all so friendly and comfortable with each other! It has a plain and simple sort of "it's good to be alive" feel to it, in contrast to the usual ever-present danger in the canon or the forced romance of a lot of fanfics.

Do your one-shots ever stay one-shots? I'm glad they don't; I like your connected one-shots style.

Ooh, this looks good. (I decided to check it out since you mentioned it in your review reply for Alive. ;D ) I love how you even incorporated Kaito as Kid into it, I wasn't expecting him to show up. And the comm. conversation was awesome. I can't wait to keep reading

These chapters are sooo cute! I love the idea of all the characters being part of the Air Force!

Well, good luck on your DLT. Is it seriously completed? :( I really reallyreallyreally hope not, it's so good. :D

So sweet, better obey Mummy-Ayumi, Mitsuiko. She'll kick your butt.

Better luck on your next go at your licence. I'm only on my learners permit, only driven a couple hours, lame!

*purrs quietly in the nice corner* this is so... sweet. Like vanilla. *purrs anew*

They cute, they really are. I'm going to like the idea of Mitsuhiko/Ayumi also ;) I may even start to like Ayumi, she really did good job in that chapter. And she do it not in the style "I'm only right", but "I'm really worry about you"... I like that. I'm glad to see you again here :)

Oh and I WISH YOU MUCH MUCH LUCK on next try with Driving License, BEST WISHES WITH THAT :)

Aw.. cute! I think they're of another type of pairing that's really nice and sweet. Go for it!

Good luck! Don't be stress and you'll be fine. )

Katie-chan! I'm here! You're not alone! BUt it does seem like everyone has disappeared, don't they?

Hmm I'm not too sure about Mitsuhiko and Ayumi... as best friends definitely, but other than that.. hm but she is such a good best friend to him though!

Good luck for your driver's licence! Driving is so much fun

Aha - Mitsuhiko/Ayumi are a cute couple! I've always loved the idea of childhood friends blossoming into something more. Although I voted for Mitsuhiko/Shiho, I'm glad you made this couple work. They are just so sweet. ;D

And good luck on your Driver's License! Second time's the charm! *offers a plate of cookies* A little extra sugar never hurts! ;P

4 new chapters! *heart* And loads of other characters making their appearance! *double hearts* Love the fight chapter best. It had me sitting at the edge of my seat. Although I couldn't catch the reference to some of their names (why "sully"?) Flight Commander Teddy is just SO Takagi. LOL.

I'm actually all for Shiho/Mitsuiko until I see Mitsuiko and Ayumi in the later chapters. Now I'm torn. Ayumi deserved to be happy too. I know! How about popping Conan (as a character based on himself and not a shrunken Shinichi) in as well? Maybe as a younger brother? Then again, it could end up Shiho/Conan!

Hmm, obscure character... Vermouth? Enemy/traitor-turned-spy suits her.

Some typos I spotted:

Chp 6: "Well asked me out here after Basic Training" I think there's a "she" missing.

Chp 8: "she was there server" as in "their" and "Ran said, bouncing up to is table" - "his table".

Chp 9: "another jet whipped in a finished the other off" - "and finished".

/is ded

“It was, ah, not intentional that we ended up in the closet, ma’am.”

and

“Why, why? Why did I have to get the crew that just wants in each other’s pants?”

and

“Don’t do it again. Or at least, don’t get caught. Dismissed.”

...

/sheer, utter joy.

I know nothing about Transformers. *pouts* and sure, Mitsuhiko/Ayumi is nice, too. (Favourite obscure characters, btw—not too obscure, but Akai? *perks up*)

Oh, my God. You rock, katie-chan, you DO. I was waiting for this since chapter one. (Kuba! Kuba!)

... this really has no right at all to be so awesome. Urk. *skips on*

I don't know why Satou was so upset about the relationships in her team. I think that in that small, almost isolated environements it's quite natural that people began relationship between each other.

And that little dialog (about making out in closets):

“This isn’t a good idea.”

“That’s never stopped anyone before. Besides, I don’t take no for an answer.”

That dialog really make me laugh.

Mitsuhiko and Ayumi were (in my opinion) very in character. I'm glad that I could read that chapter.

“Why, why? Why did I have to get the crew that just wants in each other’s pants?”

This made me laugh. I love how direct Satou can be sometimes, really. XD

“Akako wears skirts, ma’am.”

The sheer cheek of that boy... tsk, tsk. A bit of Hakuba/Akako in this chapter - can't say much more than... cookies! *showers you with chocolate-chip studded cookies*