interesting

I love this story, I love the content of the story and the way it flows. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This is a possibility I never thought of, but I really enjoy it now that you've put it out there. It makes quite a bit of sense, and keeps James's parents from seeming as horrible as it might be (although one could argue the switch was immoral to begin with, but if it were to put a baby in a loving home).

Judith's emotions were especially wonderful describing her love for James, although I dearly wish there would have been more along this line. I like James's thoughts at the end, they're so real and raw.

The story itself was wonderful. However, there were odd breaks that made it a bit confusing.

"We did it all for you…

The cries and screams of the woman echoed round the huge mansion."

The second is beginning a flashback. Perhaps you should separate it with a line so the readers know this.

"Now she would never have her son back and it was all her own fault.

So you now know James."

Another switch from third to first person with no breaks. In my opinion, it would have been clearer to write the entire letter in, you guessed it, letter form instead of third person, or at least provide breaks between first and third person.

Other than that, a great story.

Cytavani

I like the way you wrote this one-shot. It makes plenty sense..

Crimson Howler

I love this story. It totally touched me. Yeah! That reminds me I am Washu from the Neo Mag fourm the one who made the new topic about fanfics. Lol. Any way, I really loved this story. It is brillient and you got the emotion just right. I loved it!

Nice take on the whole Morgan family situation. There really isn’t enough fanfiction out there that deals with the many possibilities that could be Team Rocket’s past. Glad to see there’s a sequel! Hopefully I’ll be seeing some rocketshipping!

On with the show! Huzzah!

BansheeGirl.

Quite interesting. I've never heard that theory before, and it proves itself to be understandable. I also have wrote my own spin on things, involving James' father being a Team Rocket agent when he was younger. If you'd like to read it, the fanfic is called "Not Your Blood Anymore." Also, a bit of James angsty stuff dealing with his family I wrote is called "I Am My Own Mistake,"if you're interested. Very nice job. _

not a very good ending, bad grammar, ok otehr than that.

**sob** Poor James! **cuddles him** BTW, I have two new chapters for my story up

that was so sweet and heartwarming poor Jamesy and Judith :*( please write another one? about what happens next? that was so sad :(

I really did like it. Could you write another?

I really liked this fic! I have to agree with your profile... TR is SO underrated. And I'm the worst reviewer in the world.

*sob* I love it!

Hey, this is a really original idea! Actually I was thinking of doing *something* along the lines, but I never got around to it. *sweatdrops* Oh well. Anyway, this is really good! I haven't seen anything like it. *nods* I would like to see a sequel.