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Reviews for: The Third Wheel
tullia
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
Beautifull, i love secret rachel and puck and I love that Finn still wants to be there for the baby that´s not his.
Nova802
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Have you thought about writing it from Puck's perspective?
bsloths
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Ooh, a Supernatural reference! LOVE that show!

And an Empire Records reference?! You just keep getting more and more awesome!

"It actually hurts to be thinking as much as he is. Physically." That's our Finn!

This fic is so heartbreaking for him! But I love the ending, and that he decides to do what's right for the baby. Great companion to the hotness of ASoE!
novice242
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
I've been on the Puck-Rachel ship, but I really enjoyed this story. It's a great balance of humor, angst, drama, etc. I imagine that Finn would be hard to write, with the balance of emotional savant and village idiot that he seems to have on the show. But your voice for him rings true to me in the context of your story and your Puck-Rachel series (which I also loved).
klg77
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
This is perfection. And I must say, I'm thrilled to read you may be getting back on the Finn/Rachel wagon. Selfish, I know. :)
Drank the Kool-Aid
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this series. I really loved the Empire Records shout out. Its one of my favs. While I feel bad for Finn and I know Puck/Rachel was a one episode thing I’m still Puck/Rachel all the way. Please write more
Ophelia
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
Love, love, love this!! Hopefully there's more to come?
Crimson-Kiss17
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
Here's hoping that you aren't too far back on the Finn/Rachel wagon. The speech that Peppers gave Rachel last episode should apply to both Mr.Shuester and Finn. Neither are available and she is such an amazing character, one that shouldn't be throwing herself at a guy with a girlfriend. Anyway, enough of my ranting, the Puck/Rachel scenes were adorable and well written, though the ending was slightly disappointing. Solid work nonetheless and I hope to see another story from you soon.
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