;_; it was great, but maybe you should paragraph it? I think my eyes are crossed now...

Hey, that was good, but Aurun and Rikku!

I...um...it was nice. No, very good,

but just Auron and Rikku, never thought THAT would happen.

I liked it, you should definatly write a sequel

it was cute, please write more soon!

This is a great beginning to a story! I'm looking forward to the next part.

I really like this. Very much... Please continue, I know I'd love more of this story! It's poetic in some kind of way, quite hard to explain... but somehow the words you chose are perfect for what you're trying to describe. I await more. Heh.

Awwwrr! Kickazz! :D