I have to criticize your grammar and spelling, but this idea is very good. And I love this movie so good for you writing the first fanfiction.

AWWWE.. SO SAD

I really like this story and I know it's been a while since you updated but I think it would be great if you finshed it:) if you do decide to finish please let me know if you need any help whether it's beta reading or bouncing ideas bak and forth wtb you need because I really would love to see this story finished

yes someone is finally writing a miracle in lane 2 fic. this is an awesome movie too bad there are not many fics for it yet. i really like the story so far please continue with it.

This is really good. Eager for more of this story!