That actually was very sad. If you were to have made it a story that started off say a month or two before Videl gave birth and carried it through to this then it probably would have been gut wrenching. Thats just me though, for some reason I rather enjoy sad stories. Awesome job.

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL WHERE HE GETS THE DRAGONBALLS AND BRINGS HER BACK!

Um...sorry, but it wasn't that sad to me...

Its a very sad story. I loved it make more Fanfiction stories

i think this story should expand a little more i liked it _

This is cute! Its so sad, but this is more my element anyway. It's a great story!

Great story! Keep up the great work!

(tears)..no comment

aww! poor videl ! I love her and gohan & pan so much !

this story was so sweet...i know i'm JUST a few years late, though... :D

how sad (tears)

omg that was sad. i was almost in tears. Videl is one of my fav. characters too. Gohan is suck a good father! Good job!

:( pretty good.

I know you wrote this back in 2002 but I only just read it and I thought I'd review it anyway. Sorry, but I wasn't in tears at all by the end. I sensed no real emotion while reading it. If someone's going to die in a fic, you should set up a rapport between that character and the reader so the reader really feels the loss when they die. It would have been nice to see how Gohan really felt about his wife by having a scene between the two. This fanfic could have been longer and fleshed out a little, but instead it was written like a brief overview.

You probably think I'm a picky and mean reviewer by now but I just wanted to give some constructive feedback. I really liked the idea for this one-shot but it could have been 'fleshed out' more.

r u gonna continue? i hope so it was awesome!

Kiki k. Kiki

Aw, that was sso sad!
Poor Videl! ANd Gohan! and Pan!