So, so very awesome! I love how you write Alistair.

wow that was HOT this so needs another chapter!

I like how you don't go into specifics with the Female Main Char. so that anyone can imagine her anyway they want, even going so far as to not include a name. And yet at the same time we get some rather specific and IC thoughts from and about Alistair.

Very good one shot! A definite favorite!

*phew* Adorable.. and hot! I hope you write more. :)

Rawr! Very sexy without being sleazy. Well done.

I agree with everything your other reviewers wrote, and would like to add: HOT! Phew...

Oh - made me tingly all over! PLEASE write more!

Please continue the story!

I love it! Bioware's writers create such great characters, and I'm glad to see people writing fic about them. Hope you continue this story - would love to hear Zev or Oghren's take on their budding relationship!

Wow... so sexy! Please write more! This was awesome.

So raunchy, I think I may swoon Good job. Add more, please.

Oh goodness, this was terrible good. You're a remarkably competent writer- I absolutely wasn't expecting that. Wonderful job. You simply must add a future chapter/story; I beg of you! :)

Ooh! Ooh! Please continue! God, I'm drooling here,thank you very much. You know if you wrote in your summary 'alistair masturbating!' you'd have a slew of reviewers! Just saying. You really did a good job though, without being distasteful and that is a good skill to have. Thanks for the read, and let me know if you continue this. I've yet to read a lemon between cousland and alistair yet.

Thank you for a great read. :)

The world needs more Alistair fanfiction.

*low whistle*

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