Great! its the greatest Zoids fanfic i've ever read and i've read a few that were good, but this takes the cake...usually i don't read real long fics that have been going for a while, but...this really drew me in.

I first figured that i'd just read the first chapter, but...as you may be able to tell due to the fact that this is Chapter 11's review thingy...i read the whole freaking thing in one bloody night...i want more to read...

I like the twist with the insane thing and i also love the: "The biggest retard in the history of Zoids" part...that was classic, especially when he ran into the wall unconscious...

Update...it's good and i will someday get around to reading more of it...

LOL

Kiyone Kage

Wait a min,there better be some B/L in here and that better be Bits kid cause I couldn't read the seconded chapter.

HARRY!1FOR GOD SAKES WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!I'M ONLY CONTINUEING TO READ THIS FOR THE B/N!

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST! this is so fucking messed up! what the fuck is going on? goddammit, im gonna be fucking emotionaly scarred from reading this! by the date of the last update, i'd say youve abandoned this fic. you know why? BECAUSE YOU WROTE YOURSELF INTO A FUCKING WALL! you killed the best character off, made leena into a lustful slut who dosent care about her kids, and absolutley destroyed the plotline! you tried too hard to write a convoluted plot, and FAILED miserably. i never want to see such trash on my screen ever again.

This Fic owns! It's one of the best I've ever read. Keep updating please.

great stpry keep it up, love the twist

No! Whoa did not expect that ending! Vega? wtf? Please continue soon. It's great.

hey man nice fic...update soon...and...update...das all i got 2 sai..lolz...well update coz this is a realli good plot...i realli realli wealli wealli wanna c wat happens next...and i must go to sleep coz its friday tomorow...cya _

HOW COULD YOU! How could you do that to them. I know that Layon is extremely insane and I have no doubt that he would do that. Hmph *crosses arms,sticks lower lip out and pouts* you one evil author, you know that. *Glares, recieves glare back, cowers*. Anyways, I love the story, its really good. Tell me when the story is updated plz. Arigato,

Starkitty*

WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN YOU DAMN *SMACK* LAZY *SMACK* FUCKING *SMACK* BRILLIANT *SMACK* AUTHOR? Do you know that this is the FIRST fanfiction i EVER read? Do you know how much it TEARS ME TO SHREDS to go a *year* without a single update? Well its horrible! You MUST finish this fic, you simply have to. I won't allow you not to... somehow. Anyhow, it was great (of course) and i'm dying for her to meet up w/ big again... or to get raped by leyon again or something like that... just... please! update!

THE FUNNY PART IS WHEN THEY DIE HAHAHAHAHA

hey finish this story would ya...this is soo xciting man i swear...aniwaiz nice fic its cool but u just got me confused on dat last chapter...? wat da hell man its all a dream or sumtin i mean come on did u realli have 2 type that in...just when i thought how the story went u go and do something like that man I SWEAR... sorry about that...the time is 12:19 am on the 8th of the 6th 2003...and im goin 2 sleep...laytaz _

Way cool! Please check ur email for a contest. I changed the due date of the info to the 24 please hurry.

PLEEEEEAAAASSSEEEEEE! CONTINUE! PLEEEEAAASSEEE!

I LOVE IT!

Cool story! Oh man that was sooooo sad. Ya can't have Bit die! Hurry with next chapter!