Good story. I think I'm going to cry...

I... really liked these two pieces here. I've been writing Halle myself, recently, but the way that you have her, here, is better than what I've been doing, I think. And I love the perspectives that you present; all these thoughts and ideas I've not even considered to completion, on my own.

Damn and wow, I don't hate it at all, not even remotely.