WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER ALL READY!

By the way maybe u can have Ash forget his past (via a knock on the head or a machine or something) and then he will rise in the ranks of TR because he's such a good trainer, and then something will happen that they meet Misty, and...will Ash remember when he sees her? Huh. EMAIL ME IF YOU WANT TO BOUNCE IDEAS OFF! I'm pretty good at that sort of stuff...

AHHHHHHHHHHH! HOW DID THAT HAPPEN? Ash is a better trainer then THAT! ARRRGH...You just better make it so aSh gets out of TR quickly! Or turns spy cause Giovanni thinks he can be trusted...hmm...JUST GET ASH OUT OF THERE NOW! (By the way TR is really, REALLY easy to beat in the game...how did they get TOUGH pokemon?)

OMG, you can NOT just leave me there! no fair! cute ending by the way, we should like... write that up or something! awww! okay, more soon... keep me posted!

HA HA HA! That was funny! You're joking right! hA ha ha - you're not? YOU'RE ACTUALLY SERIOUSLY GOING TO LET ASH JUST GO ANYWAY AND THEN SAY THE END? How cruel can you get!

Pretty good, but TOO SHORT! WRITE NEXT CHAPTER!

Aww! that was so adorable! Please continue! GO RESCUE MISTY!

I like it,Nate and Ash freinds sounds kinda odd.I wonder what's going to happen now? Write on.

Good job! Keep goin', I wanna read more! _

Aw! Poor Ash! That would be an incredibly tough desicion!

HEY THIS IS GREAT! Put more up SOON!

Candy

I really liked this chapter even thoe natt did't get kicked.I wounder if Ash would really give up his pokemon it dose seem like it on.

The story is great! You should write more! And he's not OOC cause he always cries in these situations!

pretty good story

Ack! What are they gonna do if Ash resists? (Not that he will... I hope) Anyway, PLEASE do continue!

Yike! This better not end up a Misty/Nate story! Keep up the good work! Remember my suggestion I gave you in the last chapter, by the way.