I didn't quite understand that, but I liked it anyway! Do more!

Die gary Die!!

Whoa. Impressive follow-up. The first part's gary scared me, this one makes me feel sad. I'm not sure about the last paragraphg but I think that Ash, after winning, started to become like Gary and therefore lost.

Woah.

hey, these 2 were awesome! i never thought about a story from gary's point of view! I would recommend both of these stories to anyone who reads reviews before the stories. they're written really well and the plots are cool.