Just saying, but the Composer is a dick and that's what makes him such a great villain.

I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I don't like this chapter. Neither do the giant bananas. They are on their way to your house now. And no...D will not protect you.

Yesh, I shall enjoy him very, very much. O.o gives crazy fish-eye, before getting hit in the face with cinderblock

XD Ally always has this penchant for getting kidnapped, doesn't she? Even though she's far from being a damsel-in-distress, everybody's so intent on snatching her.

Oh, well. It was nice knowing that 'everybody'. XD

Magnificently done, as usual! ;3 And, of course, Cain comes to her rescue, out of the blue... Through the sheer Poawh of the Awesome. Though, there's a side of failaaassuce when

Yes...your update schedule pisses me off. D You left a cliffhanger...for the GO GIANT BANANA ATTACK! By the way...when is there gonna be more D action? ;P We all want it. You know you do too. Update Soon!

OOOHHHHHH so they're half siblings? ohoho I have to say I am SO very HAPPY with that twist. Cain's probably my next favorite next to Rico (good ol' Rico XD), but of course Ally will always be on the top spot -ehehe- oh and Ally and D's ACTUALLY getting together? o.o nice

And yeah, sorry for not reviewing as of late. College had been brutal. But luckily I'm off the hook for a while so yay! oh and please disregard for my obsessive abuse far caps, its just the adrenaline XD

So Cain's her half brother... Now I think we can all understand where the recklessness and slightly demented sense of fun in fleeing, fighting, and kicking ass comes from. Lol, Now I truely must find out what happens. Love that little twist. But I would advise you put the next chapter up soon to stall the hungery chapter-vampires from eatting you.

The Bananas deserved to destroy your place. Hey they're D fans too...and female...muahahhahahahahahahaha! Anyways, no steaming smex...D: But...it is implied. Who knows, maybe you could make a oneshot out of it...and rate it M. But since you updated...you get a tootsie pop. From your hospital bed you can count how many licks it takes to get to the center. So update soon...or the BANANAS will come for you...MUHAHAHA...HAHAHAHA...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *poof*

has sparkleh kitteh eyes, clasping hands together Aww, for me? Thankies! takes Cain's ribbon and tugs him over Cometh to meee, m'dear hunky, awesomesauce piece of vampire!

XD And woooooooooooooooo! D and Allura FINALLY got it ON! sighs in relief and shakes head I was starting to think both of their heads would explode with all of the sexual tension that they had going on. XD

Makes me wonder if Allura knows he's as virginal as she is. XDDD

Anyway, seeing as to how I dedicated an ENTIRE paragraph to the subject of sex with D nosebleeds I shall get on with the less important things. ;D

Oh snap. Allura's daddy is Cain's daddy? Oh, woe is me! And here I was hoping for some more passive rivalry(?) between him and D. pouts But Allura's flip-out session was very realistic. And I "D'aww"ed when D stopped them from following her. (Also when he stepped in front of her when they were figting Evelina)

Kyaa! glomps Again, you are not one to disappoint! Please update as soon as you can! holds up foam finger

O:. Very nice chapter.

The ending: I'm sure I'm not in the majority to be saying this, but i felt the end was a little rushed. I mean... D:. We all know D's not going to be just like "Let's go for it." I would think he'd deny it a few more times, then along the way give in just a bit more.

Allura: Very niceeee. Love her so much :DD. She's so tough even in her down moments, and I can totally agree with the whole her vs. romanian vampire _. D IS OURS! MOOHAHAHAH!

Cain: Cain is my damn hero. xD I love his little smart remarks he makes toward every single person. It's hot, funny, and adorableee. 333. He's just so freaking great _. (Still pulls for D in teh end.)

Bercarius: He's so manly. So freaking manly. He's like a big gigantic hunk sandwich of awesome man. I mean I feel bad for him raping Allura's mother and all..but dang. He's so *squeal and drool* I think Bercarius is coming in line as next man candy. :DDD

XD sorry for long review buit yea. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Hahah! The ingenius way to end a castle... And practically everything else!

...Blow shit up, of course!

Oooohhhh, I'm sniffing some rivalry between D and the spunky *coughsmexycough* Cain? And Lefty's involvement is ridiculously funny. Allura thinks he's interrogating HER for entertainment, but he was only asking questions about Cain to make D squirm... Even though it would be funny as hell to actually see D squirm. gets mental image Oh jeeze.

Pleeeeeaaaase please update as fast as you can! You can't catch me, I'm the f***ing gingerbread man! is shot from both massacring a perfectly good nurser rhyme and failing in general

Haha, don't mind me. Sick with a side of coffee. .

Please update!

I've been reading your story for the past few days, and starting out somewhat skeptical of its quality in the beginning, I'm actually starting to enjoy it.

Although, the one thing that really annoys me about your story is the lack of proper formatting. Dialogue should be separate from paragraphs most of the time, and conversations should have dialogue for each character on separate lines.

For example:

"If I had anything I wouldn't have asked you, would I?" I did not like his tone but hey it was true enough. Still it did not hurt to be hopeful. I frowned at his unnecessary snap. He rolled his eyes. "Sorry. I just can't stand being cooped up. I get edgy and restless." He blew some hair away from his eyes. "Not to mention I'm not here under the best of circumstances." I laughed grimly in agreement. Understatement of the century. We were both so screwed it was not funny.

should be

"If I had anything I wouldn't have asked you, would I?"

I did not like his tone but hey it was true enough. Still it did not hurt to be hopeful. I frowned at his unnecessary snap. He rolled his eyes.

"Sorry. I just can't stand being cooped up. I get edgy and restless." He blew some hair away from his eyes.

"Not to mention I'm not here under the best of circumstances."

I laughed grimly in agreement. Understatement of the century. We were both so screwed it was not funny.

Chapter 25! Yay! XD Wow I haven't seen this story for a while. 'tis funny. I love Cain He's crazy and his craziness clash with Ally and D's serious character so it kinda makes me wonder what will happen next. Oh and speaking of which, Ally's making a habit of hugging D quit often eh? Love

Nooo! GIANT BANANAS ARE FOR DESTRUCTION! I have an ear infection and they're all depressed though. They need some tinkering. I'll send some out next time.

Cain in insane. I love it! I wasn't expecting him to blow up the castle, but I guess that just adds onto the craziness soon to come. And Left Hand just makes my day! Now that things are all hyped up, I can't wait for more!

*_* I am waiting...for the next chapter...