 LuciferIX 11/3/11 . chapter 1I was cleaning out my inbox after knowing that with a new story up myself that I should probably take care of what was in there so that they wouldn't sit there for too long. Well, near the back I found this little one-shot that was sent to me nearly two years ago, and surprisingly I hadn't reviewed it.
All in all, short and sweet. Exactly what you want from a one-shot. Not to mention you accomplished what you were aiming for virtually perfectly. Although it's not as easy, the fics where they don't outright come out and say "I love you" can be the most rewarding.
Sorry for the real late review, but better late then never. Well, 'til next time. |
 Midnightmoon602 3/7/11 . chapter 1I love this one-shot. it is absolutly CUTE. so romantic at the same time. i had never read such a describtive and romantic one-shot in such a long time. i love this alot. i just can't explain any futher how much i love this. fantastic job on this. ) |
 GSThing 9/2/10 . chapter 1 wow... 200 years! I'm surprised that you're still here...
Anyways, Nice oneshot, I mean it's not the cliche types where the two lovers reunite and share a kiss by the sea while the sun sets, that kind of thing.
It's really believable that something could really happen. So... That's why it's so great. |
 xzavx 2/27/10 . chapter 1great one-shot! |
 Lilbet692003 1/20/10 . chapter 1 Loved it! Please for all of us fans, please make more stories! :-) |
 Twilight Smash 11/28/09 . chapter 1I think you did a wonderful job I could picture every detail of the story I hope you do another one-shot like this. |
 lara-xo 11/25/09 . chapter 1wow, that was amazing !
your writing style is remarkable and i could visualize the whole scene in my head.
the quote you chose really pegged what you were trying to express in this story.
i hope you post some more one-shots/stories soon!
-lara |
 KrystalClear101 11/23/09 . chapter 1It's just so precious! I loved every word of it. And you're right, there are a lot of reunion stories out there with the same cliche 'i love you' at the end and it tends to get old. But I have to say that this was one of the best reunion stories i've read and i've read a lot so congratulations. It did not totally suck, it rocked. Don't worry about not posting something in so long, it happens to the best of us. Great story! ;p |
 0Goddess Nyx0 11/23/09 . chapter 1That was awesome! I hope there will be more stories in the future! |
 Major Mike Powell III 11/22/09 . chapter 1Well, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1ยบ review EVAR, btches!
Now...this...was...N-I-CE!
Indeed, there wasn't THAT much cheese here, but bein' the romantic sucker that I am, I woulda given ya an "AW3SOME!" instead of a "N-I-CE!". LOL
However!
That does NOT, in ANY way, make this thing any less good.
Nice work, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on! |