Haha, very interesting. I noticed you had a little of "The Little Mermaid 2" in it. Pretty good, keep up the good work. I'd like to see what happens next! :)

hey love the story but it is kind of copyng the little mermaid when her daughter runs away from home and trys to find the under water kingdom so change it up a little bit

please update soon. Also try to fix some of the grammer and sentance structure. it's kind of hard to read and figure out what you're saying when you're leaving words out as well as repeating them, it's also kind of distracting. so if you could fix that, i would be forever grateful.

Very good beginning. You have a plausable plot and the characters are very lifelike. Please continue the story.