i cant wait to read the rest of this!

Something quick. 1) love your writing, I think you've captured Kirk really well, but my verdicts still out on Spock (so few people can capture him well :( ) 2) Kirks eyes seem to be changing colour. You mentioned them gold and then deep brown. Just in case it slipped your notice.

Otherwise, I love it so far.

I would just like to say that I love this story and it makes my heart melt and I would please like for you to continue asap. Your writing style is wonderful and you've so got the characterization perfect! I can imagine them actually saying the dialogue and it's all very realistic. Also, I'm overwhelmed by your amazing creativity at describing the planet and its inhabitants. :)

Oh, that sucks for Kirk. So close, and then his mind has to go and mess it all up. XD

Perhaps in the upcoming chapters, the slash will become heavier? There really isn't enough Kirk/Spock love out there...update ASAP, please. ^^

oh, this is really good. Please update soon.

Aww..Spock...

But he needs to let Kirk explain. D:

who is the woman which changes the moment beetween spock and kirk? i hope you understand mey question.

But thats good. it´s exiting and you can ask yourself: what if kirk hadn´t thought about "her" face and what if sulu and chekov hadn´t found their commanding officers...

In the next chapter you can maybe change the pov beetween kirk, spock, sulu and chekov. and you can describe how kirk explain the image of "her" in his mind during their mindmeld.

awe sad! D:
jim made spock cry wtf?
and who's the mystery lady,cause she better be like halle berry perfect in order to surpass our epic vulcan
as bones would say:
DAMNIT JIM!

lol
post when you get back :D

Oh, my.

-gasp-
D: it makes me sad when Spock is sad... make him happy? please? :D

Question Mark? What? NO

ahahahahahaha all that and he fell asleep? lolol!

thanks for the cookie ;)
i like that spock calls the captain "jim" when they discuss how they sleep in the bed and that they share a bed at the same time.
my favourite scene... ;) i think you know which i´ll take. i like the scene when kirk showers and thinks about spock.
and i like it when spock half smiles.

i hope you will clarify how the night goes on and how they spend their next day in the city in you chapter.
i´m looking forward it and i think i´ll love it soon.

thanks for writing that fast
maiky

lol... enthusiastic Jim...

holy sh*t i got a cookie?!
^-^ i feel so loved!

love the intimate banter in this chapter which is SO in character,you don't even know lol

favorite scene by far is jim in the shower BP
i just have this thing about guys touching themselves,and jim makes it extra hot,and jim thinking about spock makes it even sexier!
hot hot HOT!

i demand moar woman lol
btw welcome back :D