That was so good! I love Lorelai/Luke so much and you really described their relationship well. I love the colour theame and Luke's Black and White life being coloured in my Lorelai. I think thats pretty accurate and I love the idea. Fantastic!
Well that was really a different way to say it. I never really thought of their relationship this way, but it was really good. The writings really great compared to others I've read to :) Well done!