cant wait for the next one

I like this one :)

though healing a blind person is generally not good, in my opinion. If it were me, I would find it rather discomforting, like everything would be too much to take in.

but anyway, this is awesome, you should continue it some time.

Seems it's been just over a year since an update on this story, Beef... any plans to expand on this? I'm really hooked on this, and look forward to reading a lot more of your excellent work!

Dave

Grandpa RD

I know you haven't updated in a reallly long time but this story is AMAZING and deserves to be finished :D You're a really awesome writer and the suspense is killing me! Any ways I hope you do eventually update.

I'm really enjoying this so far!

You write Iroh very well. :)

I'd wondered what had happened to the Earth King and Bosco!

Make sure that you put quotation marks when they're needed. :]

I agree with Katara in that she isn't a master at her current level.

Bumi is hilarious. Especially when his memory fails him.

Poor Momo. I thought that he didn't like sea prunes.

I don't think Katara's plan will work out very well. xD

I really like this story. :) I hope that you'll continue with it!

Good luck with the next chapter, and I look forward to it!

YukinoKara

Just amazing good lord I love it!

You really got a good story going on. I really like what you got goin for you.

hope to see more soon

w2

This looks very nice. I am looking forward to reading more of this one. I shall add this story on to my favorites and check it periodically for updates (I find that's the easiest way to see if a story has been updated). Anyway, great job and keep it up!

Good story. If Toph did get her eyesight back, that would be pretty cool. Hope she likes it and can't wait for the update.

She wants to heal Toph's eyes? E...Yeah, can't see this blowing up in her face at all. Can't wait to see what does happen though.

Okay, so you wrote a lot, so this review will have a lot, too:

1) Good point about Pakku and "Master" Katara. But Katara got a lot of on the job training throughout their travels, I'm sure. Still, she probably has some stuff to learn.

2) Space is good, but Mai and Zuko have been separated for a while. Poor guys! But I totally believe in the premise, so I'm not complaining.

3) No, you're not the only one who thought about the Earth King thing, but you're the only one I've seen write about it. But this was my biggest question about the chapter: if Iroh turns down Zuko's offer because of the Fire Nation's dark legacy, then why does he think it's a good idea for Mai to rule Omashu? It's like a hereditary kingship from the Fire Nation's previous provincial governors, which would be almost as bad! Probably the one to appoint a new king for Omashu would be the Earth king, who is (good pick) Bumi currently. Those are my two cents.

4) You do a great Iroh and Zuko, especially Iroh. Iroh and Bumi together are pretty amazing. The scenes with Iroh were the best in the chapter.

5) The story so far is very backwards-looking, a lot of recapping things for Toph or whatever character might have been left out of the loop for a scene you're referring to. Sometimes it's nice because it helps point to why you think the character would do what he/she is doing, but there is a lot of it. Did you mean the piece to be structured like this? This isn't a criticism, just an observation.

6) Be careful of quotation marks that either aren't there or are in the wrong spots."

7) I like!

8) Happy Thanksgiving

9) -samtana

Thanks for updating and super cool twist. Will it work? Find out in the next installment of Where You Lead ;D

I thought the flashback was a wonderful scene, and it added a good set of layers to the piece and the characters already, even in the first section. As much as I don't think Toph would choose to go to the North Pole after the war's end, you make a very convincing argument for it, and you've got my interest with this kernel of sadness in her mind that needs to be resolved somehow. I get the sense you have big plans for this.

-samtana

Wow cool to see you back! Short chapter, yes, but interesting. Could lead to -so- many, many things. I can't wait to see where you take it.

Sweet. Starting out well. I did kind of wonder what happened after the war was over. I can't wait to hear more. Nothing to complain about so far with the exception of the ] in the middle of a word near the middle of the work.