This made my night. Thank you.

Wow, that was really good, I always have to look away for that scene but having these thoughts I can see them insdead, thanks for the great piece of work.

-Lucy

Great pick for an idea to expand on.

wow. yeah, that's some warped logic, but after having his face beat in... well, it's pretty damn good.

OH...SO COOL. NICE JOB! REALLY NICE!

Fucking a, I most definitely enjoyed this fic. "I felt like destroying something beautiful." Very good portrayal of things.

1st of all: Ouch.

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I can honestly say that I did not want to read any fanfiction of Fight Club ever, but I did, and I completely randomly came by yours. That was awesome. Completely twisted thinking, he's got complete control over their minds.

That was awesome.

That was amazing! And the way you described the feeling of the battered face ... the feeling that it was fat, the numbness ... have you ever had your face struck repeatedly because that was pretty dead on.

It was actually beautiful. The entire story was beautiful.

"Brilliant, EntreNous. Fucking genious..."

And that's really all I can think of as far as comments go. This was marvellous. And not just because I adore Angel Face :)

Wonderful! I'm highly recommending this to other readers ) Can't wait to read more from you!

Very, very, very good. The thoughts that run through Angel Face's mind while he is being beaten to near death seem like thoughts I would be thinking if I were in the same situation.

ever since i started reading fanfiction every movie i see make me want to read fanfiction of said movie...drove me insane that there's not much good fanfiction for fight club...especially not centered around angel face

but this fic has renewed my faith...yay

i liked the reference about the glass. that was good stuff. nice work.

shit, halfway through i forgot it was a fanfic, this was DAMN good, you should write more lie this man, brilliant

Woah.

this was...amazing. simply amazing. ;_; it nearly made me cry! especially the part at the end and the 'Angel face' bit.

Amazing.

Truly breathtaking.