Love how the story started all light-hearted (massively in love!Arthur is hilarious) and turned more chilling towards the end. Really well done. :)

Love this! Ok, the whole thing was so much fun to read, I love your writing style. Arthur was so entertaining "I'm massively in love with you" and his insults about Lancelot (the cad) were priceless! I also really liked how you wrote the whole Merlin/Arthur interactions because truly they are two of the funniest characters to watch together, and I'm glad you were able to capture that vibe. I was surprised you pulled Morgana and her magic into it, I was expecting Gwen to be upset about Arthur or something, but this is better, it shows Gwen as a stronger person who worries about her friends over herself and her own heartaches. The ending was perfect, just a touch of foreshadowing and a hint of the Morgana evil that is to come. Great job!

That was so funny - loved the repeated 'bloody hell's, just lovely :)

OMG please continue that was brilliant excellent start to an what im sure will be an amazing story

Oh... Good story. I was really surprised! I thought Gwen was sad because of Lancelot! ;D

Great story!

Wait for the next chapter..:-D

Yay! That was absolutely amazing!

Luv it!

that was absolutely hilarious! I loved it! I was laughing out loud at Arthurs thought processes - and then had to explain to my kids why I was laughing... But you turned it so neatly from humour to angst. Going to read it again now!

Very good story! The twist with Morgana was surprising but so interesting! :)

i love it!