|Reviews for EO challenge: tense|
| darkorangecat 11/28/09 . chapter 1
This was great! I enjoyed how little Dean was so hyper aware of his little brother even while half asleep. I also really enjoyed this sentence: "He would never forget the smile that Dean gave, as he hugged him close and placed Sam on his chest."
You have captured the family dynamic quite well in this drabble. It was an enjoyable read.
| Micaiah 11/24/09 . chapter 1
I love John being a good daddy! So sweet.
| DeansBabyBird 11/24/09 . chapter 1
It's a sweet image hun. Bev x
| Tribble Master 11/23/09 . chapter 1
Love it! That's super cute. _ Write on!
| YohKo Bennington 11/23/09 . chapter 1
Hell yes to the fluff!
| Scare4irony 11/23/09 . chapter 1
| sammygirl1963 11/23/09 . chapter 1
Aw, too sweet! Loved the scene of John laying down with his boys and pulling Dean close while lifting a sleeping Sammy onto his chest.