Heehee i luv it. please write more.

Great story!

This was really good but could you please, please please make it longer? :D

Seems like Bubbles is alone with Him :) Wonder what shall happen...

Very nice and cute. It flowed nicely and everyone's in character. Great job!

This is good, it needs to be continue.. Notice how I say NEEDS - not a want a NEED!

How cute! I liked this a lot. My main critique is that the ending was a bit short and left me wanting more. :)

I am intrigued. :) Where's Bubbles? And Ms. Keane, for that matter? Must await answers patiently... XD

wow cool, I hope you update soon I have to say interesting title, that's pretty much what drew me to this fic without reading the sumary glad it did, it seems really interesting.

I just have to say that I love the names of your fics :-)

This was really interesting. You misspelled Fuzzy's name, it's Lumpkins not Limpkins.

I found Buttercup's comment about the Narrator and Miss Keane funny. :-)

Correcting myself.

Missed the author's note.

Princess wasn't around until Season 2. Good story though.