Adorable one shot! :)

Boy, oh boy, am I late to this part this was a fabulous one-shot that I would have BEGGED you to take further when you posted it TWO and a half years ago, but as I mentione too late! Alas, it was fabulous, as is anything you write, thank you for this one! Christy

it was great really... including d slight angst..

Brilliant! C x

Loved this!

Awww, this was so cute. Thank you,

loved, loved this one shot! Thanks.

Loved it!

Wanted more!

that was lovely

xx

joy

this was sooooo good

My friend recommended this story, recommended YOU, to me, saying you were one of her favourite authors. I feel so thankful that she did. You're an amazing writer. The emotion you convey in your work is wonderfully intense and powerful with just a hint of rawness. The underlying reality of the situation and the way the story unfolds is absolutely perfect. My stomach is in knots, still, and my heart aches for these two, and it's all in the words you chose.

It's times like this that I wish I had the words to better describe the effect a story has on me. To really convey the depth and intensity that I felt. To compliment your talent with the right turn of phrase so that you would understand that there are people out there who are thankful for the emotion and hard work that you put into your storytelling.

There was nothing I questioned. There was nothing I'd change. You picked the perfect 11K words to tell a story that came to life... where the people seemed real, and I wanted them to come together as badly as they each wanted it.

I truly can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

So lovely story, thanks to stacey girl for the rec!

Sigh!

Thanks a lot for a lovely story.

I don't usually read one shots cause they make me want the story to go on and on. Well, guess what? I want the story to go on! Loved it! If you ever decide to elaborate, please send me an update. I'd love it ;)

Yes! Loved this one! :0