Hey, nice job there! I thought for sure this was another Johnny goes bump story! Nice twist using poor Mike!

I loved the story very much, hope you continue with it. I can't wait to read more.

poor mike.

i bet it was a monday!

I must admit, I thought it was johnny at first.

That poor boy, if 1/10th of the things that writers put him through happened, he's be long gone. But, if he survived,
I would guarantee it would be w/ wicked back arthritis!
(I broke my wrist this winter, had surgery and already it
has that damn ache whenever the weather is funky!)

btw, read your bio. your house sounds great! I always wanted a wrap around porch!

mk

That was great. Funny how I automatically thought of Johnny pulling in to the gas station, I guess it's just his luck most of the time so I absolutely loved the twist upon finding out it was Mike. thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

Great! A story about Mike! It's nice to see one of the characters in a "Johnny-type" situation. Let me indulge..."Poor Mike, all he wanted was Chapstick."...lol. I think if I went through all that to heal some dry lips, I'd have high blood pressure as well.

I love the variety. You keep writing 'em and I'll keep reading 'em.

I just read your story "Understandable Upset" and I thought it was very good.

Even though I consider myself a "Johnny girl" it was nice to read a short story about Mike Stoker having problems.

I don't think you have too many stories on the go. I have see other authors that are writing about different shows having a lot of stories on the go at the same time (some of them have 4 or more going at the same time). I think it shows that the writer is very good at writing to be able to keep all the stories separate and not have them mix together.

I think your writing is very good and I hope you keep on writing.

Thank you.

Okay i'll agree that you're a good writer but you've got a few too many stories going at the moment. please try to finish some before you start any more new ones.