Awesome!

so...sequal?

plz, you have to make a sequal:)

I really liked this but still have so many unanswered questions. It's a shame that it is a one-shot.

Is this done with or is there moree ?

We Want More! We Want more! good story by the way!

Great job, I wish it was more than a one shot! I'd love to read more but the ending is good anyway. :)

WOW THIS IS GREAT!

so sasuke didn't die? .

atleast that way they can meet again one day.

Really good story (i thought the sad ending fitted it well), well written too!

What was written on the folded paper? Hmm..

Good story, the characters, the plot, the pace, the ambiance were just right but the ending was rushed, too many loose ends to be able to be a great oneshot. Maybe, if you made into a chapter story? Meh...

Anywho, you go make that Part II soon and do justice to us hungry readers! XD

Godspeed!

inkblots.

This story is so sad. :(

What happened to sasuke?

You should make a sequal.

Why do writers insist on making me cry at good stories? Feh.

simply brilliant.

it was written marvelously and without grammar, spelling or puncutation mistakes.

i loved every minute of it, although i was left feeling a little unfullfilled at the end.

who was the boy (other than sasuke?) was he on the governments side and thats how he was safe.. was he safe?

this was such a magical story, the connection between the characters that you developed was simply genius and it would be a shame if you were to stop such an amazing plot line here.

its unique, not something to see on fanfiction much these days.

keep up the amazing work!

...sequel?

whoa...that's epic. i like it! You should write more! Do they meet again? oh, i HATE it when i get riled like this!

WOW! I love this story, its very good. Please continue?