 Jeffery 1/18/02 . chapter 1 Unfortunate that no one has reviewed this yet, but I'm proud to be the first. Simply put, this was an excellent story. Characterization of the two was dead-on, the langauge was superb, and the best part was that I could actually see this happening in the actual comic. As a side note, reading this story makes me even more certain that Marvel was incorrect in abandoning Joseph's character. Keep up the good work. |