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blueyblonde 7/15/10 . chapter 1
i love it
SMacked Hard 11/24/09 . chapter 1
I loved it, Brina! It's a great story. :)
Lola-Ladybug13 11/24/09 . chapter 1
haha she hit him with her slingshot, lol... too funny! great job! ]
just-off-the-key-off-reason 11/24/09 . chapter 1
I love it! It's really cute how she's so close to Danny and Lindsay. Great job!
uscrocks 11/24/09 . chapter 1
Lucy is so cute. I love how she is so similiar to both of her parents.
afrozenheart412 11/24/09 . chapter 1
ROTFL! This was so funny! I can see how both of them would be nervous to see the principal with those stories! Hahaha. I loved how you brought back the slingshot, she was totally cool with that.

This was my favorite moment "Danny laughed. “Seriously? You shot pebbles at boys? I thought that was a joke.”

“It was not,” she answered dryly. “And sometimes I feel the urge to get that started again.”

“You talking about something in particular?” He winked at her."

Lucy learned a valued lesson from her principal, it was very cool of you to portray him as a sensible and nice guy. Great work!
madmush 11/23/09 . chapter 1
this is so sweet & so true! I look after an 8 year old after school & she often will hit or push someone as a reaction to something bad! I think I have had the same conversation with her at least once a week since I've been looking after her!

I love that Lucy hit the boy with a slingshot! I can just see Lindsay making sure Lucy can keep the boys in check!

I also love the conversation between Danny & Lindsay about school. Let's face it, for most of us our school days are rarely the things we talk about with friends or partners! Especially when we have been in trouble! (I, ofd course, was a very good girl & never had to see the headmaster, for which I am very grateful! lol!)

A lovely, sweet family moment!
csimesser1 11/23/09 . chapter 1
that was good loved it
saderia 11/23/09 . chapter 1
That was cute.
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