I absolutely loved it! Perfect.

Wow. Beautiful.

Do I get to be first? Yay! Second? That's OK, too. I read this while you were twittering it, but the experience is different when presented this way, as a whole. I enjoyed it - I always liked the idea of Edward just giving in to the normal feelings a 17-year old would have. This was different than other similar storylines - no laboring over the guilt. I appreciated the nod to 'souls' in this one shot. It was such a big issue in the first three books and then became a nonissue when the change actually happened in the final story. I like that you didn't dismiss the issue.

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what a happy oneshot!

i hope this thing but you back into the buzz so you can update ur other stories, but nonetheless... good job