|Reviews for Elsewhere Again|
| mezizzle 2/13/10 . chapter 1
good...are u going to make this a full story cuz its a really good idea!
| Love.Limitless 2/6/10 . chapter 1
wow this is really good
| BrownEyes11 12/7/09 . chapter 1
OMG, that was unexpected.
It reminds me of in that Batman movie, where they like, put a bomb and a cell phone in that guys stomach? I didn't see the whole thing, but it creeped me out for weeks.
I hated it.
Anyway, this was really good, and your description is very nice. You found a way to make the routine idea of Liz born again all your own.
The only thing I would say is maybe try to split your paragraphs up a little more, so their not such big blocks of text that make my eyes go "Oh dear Lord!". lol.
Other than that: AWESOME JOB! I love it!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| TheLadySongSerenade 12/6/09 . chapter 1
O.o well, that's not depressing at all. more soon? please?