good...are u going to make this a full story cuz its a really good idea!

wow this is really good

OMG, that was unexpected.

It reminds me of in that Batman movie, where they like, put a bomb and a cell phone in that guys stomach? I didn't see the whole thing, but it creeped me out for weeks.

I hated it.

Anyway, this was really good, and your description is very nice. You found a way to make the routine idea of Liz born again all your own.

The only thing I would say is maybe try to split your paragraphs up a little more, so their not such big blocks of text that make my eyes go "Oh dear Lord!". lol.

Other than that: AWESOME JOB! I love it!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

O.o well, that's not depressing at all. more soon? please?