Reviews for Heat
Cat 6/3/13 . chapter 8
Story is amazing thus far! I love it, I'm very drawn in, can't wait for more! 3 keep up the great work!
leeluluirty 5/27/13 . chapter 8
This is really awesome, please continue! :D
Guest 5/26/13 . chapter 8
Amazing there are not many stories that can capture my attention, but strangly yours did. plz finish thnk u :)
glowzilla48 5/24/13 . chapter 8
OMG keep going ! love this story
shorthairgodess 5/7/13 . chapter 8
this was amazing i read and reread this for along time. make the next chapter come faster and be longer though. love peace and hand grenades
akumakitty 4/23/13 . chapter 8
WoW! It's amazing, their emotions and all. I didn't expect the story to be like that at all, ehehe.. I can't wait for your next chapter! So dying to see what would become of them X3
Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 8
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Bellz 4/15/13 . chapter 8
Ok, I never ever used to be a yaoi or yuki person, but lately I've been addicted to it. It started with Bubbline and Marshball with Adventure Time, then to DexDark with Dexter's Lab, to ZADR. But with all those fanfictions, I have never happened upon any story so well written. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive, in character, and absorbing. I would never have thought of a pregnant Zim. You are the most amazing writer I have found so far. Plus, I usually HATE smut (it just makes me uncomfortable, ok?), but this was ok. Your story is just altogether beautiful. Now just FUCKING UPDATE! That is all, thank you very much.
erin 4/1/13 . chapter 8
i love this story! i wanna know what happends next
deskdraik 3/24/13 . chapter 8
Geez, do not take much, your fic is just great, I love it, I hope you continue it soon.
DARKLOVEFORFANFICTION123 3/19/13 . chapter 8
more pls!
Randomstrike 3/9/13 . chapter 8
Oh shit
Best. Reaction.
Omg poor baybeeeeeeee
Maude 2/27/13 . chapter 8
I'm really into this story, I really really hope you would comtinue it, at least what you have of the next chapter, pretty please? It's really good and interesting, I love how you keep them in character.
Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 8
You should continue this! I love it!
ilovehumans 2/14/13 . chapter 8
I thought this chapter was amazing like all ur other chapters, thanks for uploading it nd plz update it soon as possible thnks
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