I really enjoyed this one-shot I completely sympathize with McGee on this one. That girl really did seem like sweetheart, and even though I'm an avid McAbby fan, I wouldn't have minded if they had truely fallen for each other. I think this one-shot really did summerize what McGee felt after that shot.

i find it amusing that I am reading this, while the replay of this episode is on cbs tonight! lol

Poor Timmy, I was in shock when Amanda wasn't the girl he could be happy with though I wish he'd be happy with Abby.

Wow! you captured that who moment so well. I hope you write more. :)

He sure hasn't had much luck with women, has he? I thought it was so cute when they met at the coffee shop... Asking her to get his phone out of his pocket? Does that sound like our Tim? I loved it... I was so excited that he had a cute girl making a play for him. The lie detector woman was cute too, but she was more of a nerd... "Amanda" seemed so sweet and Abby seemed jealous *sigh*. Thanks for the additional one-shot. I could read stories about that episode all day long!

Great fic. Great. I loved how the team was instantly at his side. Sigh. I love the team stuff LOL.

Haunting and wonderfully done!

Lovely character study. Very true to McGee. His reactions were pitch-perfect. I felt for him.

Loved the ending, too, where the understanding voice isn't one you would expect...

Great job!

I liked reading this short story, I would love to see more