|Reviews for Titanic|
| xGuiltyxPleasure 10/8/10 . chapter 20
Every night in my sleep I see you I feel you, that is how I know you go on...
It's really ironic that I read this chapter before I went to school this morning, and then one of my friends quoted that song today to me.
YOU KILLED SHARPAY! Monster. I kind of had a feeling though, since I remembered you saying it was going to be a depressing ending, or something along those lines. But this ending was sooooo sad.
I have to say, one thing that bothered me was that Troy had a lifejacket when Sharpay didn't. I mean, I remember Sharpay's refusal for taking one, and that would have been fine, had Troy not taked one either. But since he had, and there was already a lifejacket between the two, and he knew she couldn't swim, I think later on, he should have insisted she wear his instead.
So in that way (And the fact that he didn't develop that mother lifting up a car to protect her child strength) I blame Troy.
I was sitting in Pre-Cal today, daydreaming, trying to pretend I was in a happier place that didn't involve math, and then I remembered "Sharpay's dead" and I swear, I was legitmately depressed for a moment. Lol.
Hmmmmmm, I think a Frankenstein ending might work out nice, in which Troy ressurects Sharpay.
Jk, jk, and I'm too tired to think of a creative ending right now. I think Troy should commit suicide though. In a sick way, it's kind of romantic, if you think about it. He'd rather die now than have to live without her for the rest of her life. (And, I suspect he'd probably feel partialy responsible for her death, and not be able to handle the guilt.) Maybe he tries to live on for a while, but is plagued with remorse and suffering from the loss of his love. He becomes an alchoholic, and about a year later or so, he kills himself, maybe on the anniversary of the ships sinking.
(And then they could be reunited in some dream sequence, symbolic of heaven like in the film :p)
You know, at the end of Titanic, when Rose dies, I have to wonder though, what about her husband? I assume he's already dead, since she's so old, and in heaven, is he just shoved aside and forgotten for her first true love? Just a thought.
Anyways, I realize that this review is getting super longish, so I should probably wrap it up. This was a great story, and I'll try to review all your future Troypay fics. Congratulations on finishing the story. (Evily, I might add. :p)
| Jenny1991 10/8/10 . chapter 20
Oh my goodness, your story makes me so sad! I started reading it when you started posting it, but then, I became afraid to read each chapter cause I knew that it would end badly! Normally, I don't review as well, but I felt that since this was your last chapter, I just had too! Overall, it was a great story, I'm just not a sad ending type of person, but you did write it well. I hate it when people die :( Hope that you keep writing, can't wait to read your next story!
| xiheartu 10/7/10 . chapter 20
such a sad story...the ending was just brings me to tears.
but like people say, not all stories can end with a happily ever after.
i think this is the best way to end the story.
at least chad and taylor go their happy ending.
| Shall Remain Nameless 10/7/10 . chapter 20
HOW COULD YOU!
WHY! AGH...I felt my entire core shake when Molly found Sharpay's corpse. And just MOMENTS before I was SO HAPPY because Chad lived! OMG; why!
I loved it, craved every second, and now I'm going to go to sleep mondo depressed-sort of.
My creative ending entry is too long, so I'm going to attempt to send it via PM. Hopefully it works!
Much love! BxD
P.S.-Lingering Still has been finished. Wanna be awesome and grace it with your reviewing prescence? D
| xGuiltyxPleasure 9/27/10 . chapter 19
Okay so at first I was like, big aww moment with Troy refusing to let go of Sharpay during the literal sinking of the ship.
But then what does he go and do? He lets go of her! Tsk tsk. I'm not happy with Troy right now, even if he meant no harm. And his relief that he's safe, and allowing himself to fall asleep. He should be demanding that the people on the lifeboat find Sharpay!
I'm pretty sure Chad is dead. Poor Taylor.
And Ryans death hit me more in this chapter for some reason, when Sharpay was reflecting on it.
Sharpay. Can. Not. Be. Dead. She just can't. That will make me a billion times too sad to read the last chapter.
Aw. Troypay aren't the only couple who've lost each other. Rose had her line.
Only one more chapter. I hope it's not too long before its posted, because I'm dying to know how this all ends.
| J2BK 9/23/10 . chapter 19
great chapter! im so glad that troy is okay but please don't kill sharpay! let them find her and save her and same for chad! they both have someone waiting for them!
| Shall Remain Nameless 9/22/10 . chapter 19
"Your HERE there's NOTHING I FEAR!"
...Sorry I had a Celine Dion moment.
OH EM GEE! I loved this so much. Rose said her famous line! I can die happy. But I do think that if you kill Sharpay and/or Chad-I might jump off a bridge.
...Not really. But I'll be super sad;
uber excited for the ending! Cannot wait!
My name's at the bottom -squee!-
| xiheartu 9/22/10 . chapter 19
Awee; I watched Titanic many times
and you wrote this story pretty good, I might say.
Please write the next chapter soon.
I would want to know what happens next.
| CutiePieWannabe 9/22/10 . chapter 19
THIS IS AWESOME! Hope you can update soon!
| OlympicBeliever 9/1/10 . chapter 1
Sounds great so far! Are all the characters from England?
| xGuiltyxPleasure 8/30/10 . chapter 18
Last chapter we'll ever read this "ship"? Dear God, I hope you're referring to "Titanic" and not Troypay. If the latter, your penname will no longer serve any purpose. lol.
Old theory or new theory? I know nothing of the newer one, but I'm very glad you've taken the time to thoroughly research this regardless. I think that's important to the dignity of a story.
Really, I applaud you for this entire story. I wouldn't guess it was easy to write, especially these last couple of chapters. And with only a couple of reviews per chapter as you told me, I'm glad you remained inspired to see it through to the end.
Gasp! Ryan's dead. :'(
Oh, are Jack and Rose on board with Troy and Sharpay? Well, we know what happens there. :'( - My second one of those. They were both necessary. Titanic is my favorite movie btw, beyond my HSM obsession.
She can't swim? Oh god, well then Troy definitely can't pull a Jack Dawson and drown, or Sharpay's going down too. (Okay so he froze to death technically, but then he went under and she was left in the water alone, because a corpse can't save her.) That was just a cruel, cruel place to leave this chapter off.
I don't care about the rest, I just want Troypay to survive. lol.
| Shall Remain Nameless 8/27/10 . chapter 18
OH MY GAWD.
I'll be honest; I usually skim through the chapters, and get the gist of what's going on. -Don't shoot me!-
But this is one of the few I read all the way though,
and I'm glad because there was So. Much. Drama.
I LOVE IT! And Ryan's dead. -tear-
I sort of pictured it in a gruesome way; you say "He hit something sharp" I'm like "DID IT GO THROUGH HIM! OUCH MAN!"
And OMG Jack and Rose cameo! I was really sad during the course of what was going on, and when I read that I smiled.
It's getting SO GOOD! And when Troy was all "Don't you dare let go!" I was like "YES!" now all she needs to say is "I'll never let go Troy!" And I can lay this story to rest. XD
But yeah-wow, this is a really long review for me; mostly me
just babbling. But I know you don't care...I hope. Sorry for being so AWOL, but recently I've only had ideas for my co-write stories! Tragic. And I also have a small one shot in the works...along with working on everything else.
Update soon, or I might throw thought grenades at you till you get the hint. :]
| CutiePieWannabe 8/25/10 . chapter 18
I love this story!
| Anastasia 8/16/10 . chapter 17
I'm telling all my friends about this. It is so sad but I can't stop reading it!
| xGuiltyxPleasure 8/1/10 . chapter 17
I've been really bad about reading and reviewing chapters in time.. I'm sorry.
I liked the title of this chapter. Up she goes, 'cause the ship goes up, and also it's that little song Rose sings near the end of the movie "Titanic".
Wow, I actually felt sorry for Gabriella in this chapter. I hated thinking about the gruesome death.
Quite honestly, I think you did really well. A lot is happening in like half an hours time, but I think you conveyed it very well. Very descriptive. :)
I am so anxious about how this is going to all turn out. So update soon.