you know, this makes a hell of a lot more sence than some of the other storys i have seen...i mean, of course england would feel that way. you dont just get over a berayal like that so easy...

it made me cry by the way, so good work ;)

So goddamn cute. I've been looking for a fic like this everywhere!

I hope England learns to love America again. :,

England get a clue! Gawsh.

Oh dear... When America began to cry, my eyes were flooded, making it hard for me to read- causing me to read and re-read several lines...

Truely heart-wrenching! I loved it... and i enjoyed how the beginning was on a light note and how it seemed to get lighter... until America confessed the first time... then it went from kinda-dark, to no light at all...to a hint of sparkley light... amazing...

No wonder this fic seemed so familiar! It was based of the doujinshi! *slaps forehead* great job with playing it out in words. I know quite a number of people who've tried to rewrite the doujinshi off into words of their own but none as successful as yours.

Ah, this is definitely a fic version of the doujinshi "Yakusoku no Mireniamu", perhaps you should include that in an author note.

But goodness, the way you captured the artwork to put it into words is great. Although there were some pieces missing, I still love the angst of an insecure Arthur. c:

Aw! -GIGGLE- Yes, with caps. ))

AWESOME! :) So cute. :D Go America! (Slash Alfred!) You're awesome, making a fluffy story out of mistrust. :D

MAKE MORE!

Stunning. Absolutely stunning.

I was wondering when someone would write a love confession like this! Insecure!England needed to be done, and you did it so beautifully! Yearning!America made me shiver _

Yay! A fanfic version of my FAV doujinshi "Yakusoku no Mireniamu". The story made me cry, and I LOVE your version! It's has so much more detail! Wish you can make a continuation out of this, since I'm annoyed that the doujinshi doesn't have a continuation and leave me hanging with England being insecure. They're almost immortal, it'll be a painful love life T_T

I felt a tug in my heartstrings.

I really liked it, though! Even though it was kind of sad, it was very sweet too! Very enjoyable to read.

this was such a sweet fic.

i could feel everyone's pain so well that when america and england started crying i just wanted to cry with them.

thank you for making such an emotional fan fic; i love these the best

i look forward to reading more stories from you and keep up the good work

alice in murderland