|Reviews for Fathers|
| Uberlemming 4/23/13 . chapter 1
A nice study of the consequences of Naruto's treatment. Very well written and very poignant. I'm not crying damnit! It's just raining...on my face...
| Emera-chan 2/27/13 . chapter 1
Oh, this took hold of all my heartstrings and nearly tore them out. Great fic :)
| mndstjohn 11/12/12 . chapter 1
This one made me cry!
| LovelyToMeetYou 2/21/12 . chapter 1
This was tremendously good. It was short, direct and very well written. I loved it!
| Jaded Baby Blues 12/24/11 . chapter 1
Shit! I blame this all on my weirdo emotional mood swings but this fic of yours has affected me in more ways than one! I'm near tears! I find this fic very touching! I loved how you described Naruto's feelings towards each of his "fathers". I especially loved the one about Yondaime! That one really got me and I can understand the feeling of wanting to say things to the ones you have already lost even if you wonder whether or not they can hear you...Over all an awesome fic! I loved it all!
| Greyscale Tragedy 12/23/11 . chapter 1
I love your prose :) it's not particularly fast paced - which is what I usually prefer in fiction - but it kind of crept up on me in this perfectly witty way and beat me over the head with its beauty towards the end. Your style of writing is great for a late night with a cup of cocoa.
"It's stupid, Naruto knows. Sasuke is a genius, after all, and Naruto is just a loud idiot. And he should have been used to being an afterthought, a mere footnote on the page that has 'Sasuke' emblazoned all over it. In that way, he knows he has failed Kakashi-sensei, and it is how Kakashi-sensei has failed him."
THIS. I love those types of circular sentences (what are they called, exactly?) and how it so nicely sums up Naruto's conflicting emotions towards Kakashi. Breaks my heart.
| The Other One 7721 7/13/11 . chapter 1
This was so well written. There is so much more to Naruto than what's on the surface. I almost teared up when Naruto's fifth (and first) father was mentioned.
| Megusiq 2/17/11 . chapter 1
This is good. I makes me wanna cry and laugh at same time. It's cute especially the last part, or when with Jiraiya.
And the first part is sad, but good. Good work. Keep it up
| MysteryLady-Tx 8/25/10 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that was sad and GREAT! I loved it!
| Edna'Shade 6/20/10 . chapter 1
I loved this one-shot. Well done :D
| The Holey Gred and Forge 5/17/10 . chapter 1
Awww, I really liked this, especially the last part where he says he wants to tell Minato so many little things. Naruto and Minato's father/son relationship is my fav.
| giganemo 2/8/10 . chapter 1
I like parts of it, but the one with Kakashi kinda ruins it for me :/ I don't get why so many people think Kakashi ignored Naruto in favor of Sasuke. He never did.
| pk 1/24/10 . chapter 1
oh ::wibble:: 3
| SlimReaper 1/9/10 . chapter 1
Aww! Seriously beautiful, and so very IC. Especially the part about Kakashi. I always thought that when he and Sakura and Naruto were made into Team Kakashi in Shippuden that some of that was fixed, but it never can entirely be undone. Poor Naruto, he needs someone to just cuddle him! And you are exactly right-he will never ask for it. Sniffle!
| KrC 1/1/10 . chapter 1
This story makes me want to cry and giggle at the same time! The first sentence nearly made me burst into tears and I was laughing during the last paragraph because of all the cuteness. But then I want to cry again because it's all so true. Beautifully written, I think you captured the things that Naruto hides brilliantly, love it!