A neat take on Jo's feelings. I think you captured her sassy spunk. The end is bittersweet in light of how things ended...but it almost brings a sense of humor to it (in a dark way). Sometimes I wonder if I'm the only one who wonders if she'd have taken him up on it if she knew that it was her last night...

Anyway, nice job!

"She wanted the fairytale ending. Dean? He wanted sex."

wow...that almost sums it up for a lot of guys...LOL

good job :)

yeah, I like how she handled that...very mature and funny cause it's like 'oh! denied!' to Dean! lol

I loved Jo in 5x10 which was werid because she usually reminds me of a puppy! You captured that perfectly! How she grew up. It was awesome and I loved this part in that episode!

I like this :) Short, but powerful. Great to be given insight on Jo and her feelings about all that; and you're right, she really did mature a lot.

This is great! I can imagine those very thoughts going through Jo's head. This scene could have made me cringe - but not with actors like Alona and Jensen. They played it with such charm and affection. Very well written - well done.

I loved that scene so much. I mean, for a second, I thought she was gonna go there and then "Oh BURN!" I'll admit it, I cheered. This is a great little interal companion for that moment too, mostly cos its all so true, lol.