Hmm, are we actually going to see this finished?

Oh, updates!

I felt like I had read the first half of that conversation before, somewhere, but the ending was a surprise. I am curious about the next chapter and I did love that teensiest bit of parenting Cain does.

I ansolutely love this. Can't wait to see more.

What about arresting them for assault against a regular citizen? I know Az isn't going to go for it, but it doesn't look like her 'just let them get it out of their system' plan is working either.

I love the Queen's last line. The sound of mothers everywhere.

It took me a couple of readings before I realized the pages were shapeshifters.

Well, they were tears of gratitude, though not for the reason Cain suspects. And I'm growing to like Tayborne.

Is Tayborne the tall guy that wears Cain's hat or did you just make him up?

I have to admit my first thought was, nobody has taken Az shopping yet? But then when she compares the protection detail to the Sorceress' Longcoats, boy I got shivers.

If there's one downfall to being in Az's head, we miss out on what Cain said too.

I'm actually surprised DG didn't suggest breaking his arm. Haddon sounds like a jerk.

As annoying as we would understandably find someone following us all day long, I think we've done the DG hates the security detail troupe to death now. I'd prefer it if the whole family hated it (especially in this story where it hadn't been in place before).

I doubt DG will make it easy for Cain, the girl never does.

I have always enjoyed your style of writing; it confuses me and charms me at the same time. You have such a particular way to describe feelings, linking them with happenings, textures, places... please go on. Will you go on as well with "In the shadow of the mountain"? I miss little Delia.

Hmm. I can't decide if I like the possible pairing, but so far I'm loving this story. It's nice how it all flows as one plot. Hopefully there'll be more soon?