loved it great job

OK, She, jcal4ever, and dougandcarol22 (a-HEM!) are all competing for my attention at the moment, so altho i have no idea what i just read, pretend I di and altho i can't remember what happened, it was written purty well. keep on, i want to see where you take thi promise i'll go back and read it *properly*. -m ;-)

This is So very good. You should throw in both Abby and Susan's reaction to the news in the next chapter. I would assume they would be pretty upset. Dave should be pretty upset too considering he always seemed to have a crush on Deb.