   Princess Shania 12/17/11 . chapter 1This is greatness. |
| Auniqua 4/27/11 . chapter 1 At least Simba changed his mind about Kovu |
| Starzinmieyez 2/23/10 . chapter 1 Great poem/short story! SHAME ON SCAR! Yet another one of his plans back-fired on him! |
| Anastasia 1/7/08 . chapter 1 Precious! |
| Seneti 2/18/07 . chapter 1 AW! Love that poem. Great job |
| wild wolf free17 9/25/05 . chapter 1 I love this poem. You did very well. |
| Martha 8/27/05 . chapter 1 This is a good poem. It's cool how at the end you have Simba forgive his uncle and make peace with him. |
| nalajen 7/5/04 . chapter 1 I thought that poem was cool...I mostly liked the ending in which Simba showed some sarcasim toward scar... keep writing! |
| Sparky Lurkdragon 2/23/04 . chapter 1 Oh, lovely poem - I can't tell if it's a sonnet or not, having not studied them yet - but 'tis a great poem, whatever it is. It also stays in character - this sounds like something Simba would write, if he could grasp a pen or had acess to a computer. _
Keep writing! |
| Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'Luv 12/15/03 . chapter 1 Good poem- I like it, and the couplet at the end was warming. _
Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some! |
| Aus Delphinus 11/21/02 . chapter 1 Groovy, excellent! |
| Neostar1 5/23/02 . chapter 1 Nice! |
| Jude1 4/4/02 . chapter 1 WOW! That was fantastic! |
| sdfgsdfgsgdf 3/13/02 . chapter 1 You are an AWESOME poet! |
| me 2/2/02 . chapter 1 kewl |
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