It has been a gazillion years since I’ve been single, trolled the bars with my friends and smashed mouth with some random dude after last call. But I remember how the whole situation could be somewhat liberating and maybe even empowering in some weird way.

It was interesting that you didn’t disclose the name of the bartender. I’m curious if that was to keep the whole encounter emotionless (just the act, nothing more) or if it was to hide her identity until a later chapter? Hmmm. Jake has her phone number in his pocket. I’m looking forward to what might happen in the morning.

I’m enjoying this story on such a highly emotional level. I am totally feeling the characters’ pain and confusion and emptiness and guilt and also their deep caring for one another. I love how we’ve gotten to know Embry, and how he is trying to protect both Claire and Jake.

On the lighter side, I’m still giggling about Embry’s reaction to shopping at Walmart. (“For a fucking family store, there sure was a bunch of lacy and sheer shit” there.) So True!

Wait. What? Quil is dead? Hold on a second. I have to catch my breath. I’m…just…well…stunned. Damn!

Oh Jake. At the same time that I thought 'ugh, gross', I felt a bit relieved for him. It obviously helped him. Yes, not the ideal way to deal with his anguish and pain, but he really needed to shut down for a bit. He seemed to accomplish that. Quick and painless, right? So freakin happy he wore protection. He's wanted Claire to confort him and when she does, he can't deal. Im really feeling his deap anguish. I wish he would let them help him. Im hoping that he doesn't make what happened a habit to cope. Dare I think that Claire might fall for both of these gorgeous men? I really like the way she describes each of them. But Jacob totally owns my heart. I want him to get better. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more. Great chpt. So happy that I was able to finally review all ur chpts. U so deserve it. Hugs ;)

Wow, you've really created such real, raw feelings and reactions in this story. I'm truly savoring your choice of words. Your descriptions of them, places, smells, memories, longing, all of it, makes it all so vivid for me. I feel a part of their pain and journey. I find myself wanting to reach in and comfort them all in their own individual way. Even though this is so difficult, Im addicted to this story. I love these three and want to know more.

Fantastic Job. TTYS ;)

So painful. The thought, feelings that go into having to leave a loved one at a burial site, while the casket is being lowered is indescribable! If that was me, no one would be able to drag me away! Such a touching chpt. So glad that Jake, with Em at his side, gave a speech at the funeral. Omg, they all left. I understand the need to go, get away. Perfectly conveyed. All of it. Great job.

Painful, Utter Hearbreak, Horrific Tragedy !

That was the last thing imaginable that could happen. It was so incredibly difficult to see it play out. Felt like slow motion. I thought it was great how you went from his thoughts to what was actually happening. Almost as though he was watching a movie. Your description of feelings and reactions was fantastic in the hospital scene. Had a very heavy heart! Found myself holding my breath from all the feelings that Jake was experiencing. Claire, OMG, I would want to DIE too!

Such a hard but great chpt. On to the next one. I can't wait to read more. TTYS, Hugs ;)

Yup, I agree. This chpt was really great. I really enjoyed their banter. Thought u captured them perfectly. They r so funny together, and they obviously love each other alot. Like brothers, always clowning around, bickering, but no matter what, would always be there for each other. My poor Jake. I hope he heals soon. Another great POV and chpt. Off to read more. Hugs ;)

Oh yay, how exciting. She found her dress.

Just as all hope was almost lost, it appeared.

Thank goodness, she was close to having an anxiety attack.

Her and Quil are just perfect together. Loved her POV.

Great chpt. Off I go to read more. TTYS ;)

UNBELIEVALBE. What a horrible, selfish BITCH !

She totally broke him. I could clearly picture it all. U described that all perfectly. But his pain, Omg. I loved ur choice of words when u said ' he was sure he would start bleeding emotion and pain at any moment'. WOW !

Fantastic first chpt. I absolutely hate seeing Jake in pain, but this is so realistica and I won't stop reading it. I'm off to read more. Ttys ;)

very emotional story

Damn this was a dark chapter but it gave insight on Embry and how he grew up and how he thinks. I kept saying Quil's name all chapter long good Lord this shit was hard to read at times without tearing up. Until next time.

grief processing is indeed different for everyone - and sometimes getting hammered and having a quick, uncomplicated hook up is just the medicine you need - hmmm Jake and Claire? - is that where you are heading?

Yay u updated!

Loved it

I really wish embry ends up with Claire

I don't know why but I just want them to..

Great chap

Loved it

Update soon!

Another amazingly powerful chapter. Your ability to capture their grief and pull you in is glorious and utterly heartbreaking. As always I can't wait to read more.