|Reviews for Don't give up on love Chobi!|
| voodooqueen126 1/30/11 . chapter 3
May I ask why everything is in bold, italics and underlined? These features should really only be used to emphasise occasional words.
| voodooqueen126 1/30/11 . chapter 2
Rather than writing *character name* "Speech" you should write
"speech" said character name.
Said is one of the unobtrusive words in the English language and you must not be like a long winded victorian author and fear overusing it.
| voodooqueen126 1/30/11 . chapter 1
May I ask if English is your first language? Because this has the potential to be a really good story, but you do need help with that grammar and syntax.
| paintgurl 12/5/09 . chapter 2
Yi San is one of my favorite dramas. So I am happy there is some stories for it.
Your story has potentail, However your writing style makes it hard to concentrate on the story with the * around the names and the 2 chapters feel rushed. And not enough descrption.
| TenTenD 11/27/09 . chapter 1
Nice story my sister-in-writing. This is so sweet. Love Cho Bi's way of thinking.
Go Dae Su/Cho Bi couple.