|Reviews for Broken Trust|
| hi.its lila 4/23/13 . chapter 23
Please more... I would show u my pouty face but I cant... I'm sorry...
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 23
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 23
| Guest 3/16/13 . chapter 23
Please Update Soon
| Guest 3/15/13 . chapter 23
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| Bella4evr3 2/26/13 . chapter 23
Really great so far I can't wait for the next. Chapter and are you even thinking about having katara and Osi as a couple cause I would really love to see it. You are a an amazing writer. Awaiting your next chapter:)
| Kiatana 1/27/13 . chapter 23
This is such a great story! I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen next.
| Kiatana 1/25/13 . chapter 2
I'm enjoying the story. Except for Aang. I understand that you needed him out of the way but I feel like you changed his character to gain that. In the series Aang was honest upfront about being who he is even when everyone thought it was a bad idea (like how he didn't want to kill Ozai when everyone told him there was no other way) And yet you have him sneaking around and lying. It would have been better if he had just explain to Katara that he felt like maybe they felt pushed together due to traveling around but might not be meant for one another. Of course this review is comming way too late to change anything but maybe you'll keep it in mind for future fanfiction. It takes away from the story for some people when you use characters as a mean to an end and disregaurd what the character is really like.
| Guest 1/24/13 . chapter 23
Evil spirt, is being evil.
Grrr evil spirit.
Anywho I have really enjoyed reading the story so far.
I am so glad Katara FINALLY came to her senses. As for Ozai being a manipulative tool.
He is a tool. XD
| Mujona 1/11/13 . chapter 23
MOAR! NOW! I WILL FIREBEND YOU INTO THE NEXT CENTURY IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON! *room goes up in flames*
| CultOfStrawberry 10/18/12 . chapter 23
This is an absolutely fascinating and well-written story, keep up the good work!
| Vheeri The Succubus 10/14/12 . chapter 6
Normally, I'd go on a 3 page review-a-thon about punctuation, other Englishy things, and pick apart every piece of a story. But here, I'm just going to type up my only concern. Katara is OOC. And hard. Ozai said it best in a sentence really " I would prefer you attack him, rather than running away..." Whenever faced with an enemy in the series (like being stuck with Zuko), she'd either attack or keep her distance. And always maintain a cold demeanor. She wasn't clumsy, she didn't blush, and even though Ozai is powerless, Id expect him to use brute strength and his superior martial arts in a fight while Katara bends. When Lee insulted her, a water whip would have shut him up good then Ozai could have intervened. I see this came out before L.O.K. so I can forgive anything that doesn't fit into canon. Also, it's a fanfic and I've read crazier pairings that I don't even like, but for the sake of good writing skills, I keep going. You've got talent, but if anything, it's the OOC that bothers me... and the repetitiveness of some things. I'm willing to keep going for a bit, but mainly in hopes Katara will stop acting like a ditz.
| SafireBlade 8/15/12 . chapter 23
good start hope u continue it
| BadWolf49 7/31/12 . chapter 23
NOOOOO! that cant be the last chapter! you have to write more! so many unanswered questions! come on! a few more chapters? epilogue? sequal? it says its complete, but i dont belive it! im begging you! WRITE MORE! please! you made me not be able to hate Ozai... so now you need to write more! Please! :D