 Leia 2/6/02 . chapter 1*bursts out laughing*
*tries to type but is laughing too hard*
*still laughing*
*attempts typing again, but is forced to stop because she is reaching for Kleenex to wipe her eyes*
*getting strange looks from her brother's dog*
...I feel like Kaio-sama, wiping at his glasses and muttering "hee, hee!" as he tries desperately to stop laughing...
That was great! All the characters were perfect, and ... and ... good heavens, I'm still laughing too hard to think clearly. Maybe I should stop thinking about it ... *giggles*
Okay. Ahem. (still giggling) This was so excellent, if you can't guess from my inarticulate..um.. inarticulate-ness? You know, rarely does a story cause me to lose my entire vocabulary in less than five minutes because I'm laughing too hard to focus my thoughts or form coherent sentences. Eeesh.
Well, I enjoyed this very much! *Bows* Thank you for giving me something to smile (laugh hysterically) over. #18's mischievous evilness was absolutely perfect, as was everything else. I could picture everything happening as if it was right there in front of me and (don't picture it ... don't start laughing again ...) ... whoop, there I go again.
I also enjoyed it because there were a few serious bits in it to counterpoint the humour, and the two genres were excellently blended. All those used in the story were perfectly in character - I've often imagined them reacting in that way to similar situations.
I quite enjoyed Oolong's little "Oh... my... GOD" - just picturing that makes me laugh, again. Your dialogue was priceless. I hope you continue with this kind of excellent work, because I need a good laugh like this quite often.
(Leia blinks, realizing she hasn't reviewed "Washed Away" yet ...)
Whoops! I'd do that now, but it's late ... arrrgh, I thought I'd reviewed that long ago! Hm.. guess not. Well, I'll do that later, hn?
*chuckles* I'm going to giggle all night, I just know it ... and tomorrow, when I see the picture of Kuririn I have taped on my English binder, I'm going to burst out laughing all over again. This is all your fault! ...thanks!
Best of luck, and write more. Lots more! _
Leia (who is STILL laughing ...) |